The two pie charts illustrates predict the future of global manufacture in a number of different industries.
Overall, the global production by sector has not changed much. After about 20 years, services still the industry with the highest percentage, while two industries forecast to has the lowest percentage are materials and agriculture.
In 2030, services have a percentage equal to the total of other 5 sector combined, showing this is the sector with the largest global manufacture. Besides, the industry has a relatively large global production is manufacturing, just about 19.6%% less than services. The energy, info-com tech, agriculture and materials are smaller, with 6.7%,5.6%,4.0% and 2.9% respectively.
In 2050, services is still the sector with highest global manufacture. Moreover, services percentage increased mildly about 1.0%. Same as services, manufacturing has 33.1% of global production and continues to rank second. There are the slight change, in 2030 the sector has a least global production belong to materials. But after 20 years, when materials increased by 0.6% and agriculture decreased by 2.0% ,the sector with lowest percentage changed to agriculture. The energy and info-com tech also swapped ranking, info-com tech percentage is more than energy about 1.6%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...centage are materials and agriculture. In 2030, services have a percentage equa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, second, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62244897959 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00284468767 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6754877546 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8333333333 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276025605804 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117028690137 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107189604351 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165398436672 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530661780972 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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