The chat below gives information about Southland s main exports in 2000 2021 and future projection of 2025

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The chat below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2021 and future projection of 2025.

The diagram illustrates the information about Southland's major exporting products in 2000 , 2021, and also future planes for 2025. In common, it can be seen that the major exports are changing over the period.
It is clear from the chart that the first exports in Southland is International tourism , with huge exports value. So , it is exports will be the leading export. And it is growing for the period of time. The lowest index was in 2000 , with profit 8 billion pounds. Worldwide tourism will be increasing to 10 billion pounds by 2025. Second exports in Southland is diary products. Also the lowest rate was in 2000 , with profit 7 billion pounds. And it is rises to 10 billion in 2021. But, on predictions profit of the dairy products will be decreasing in 2025, about to 9.5 billion pounds.
Last exports in Southland is meat products. It is clear from the diagram that meat products were the main exports in 2000. The highest rate was in 2000 , and the rest of the years it will be decreasing

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ts will be the leading export. And it is growing for the period of time. The lowe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64406779661 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48227013525 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474576271186 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8116845214 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.7142857143 112.824112599 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6428571429 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294976109237 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108471506075 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943699368039 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228304825254 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640552131674 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 61.2550243902 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 10.3012195122 32% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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