chocolate process
Chocolate is one the most popular sweet snacks in the entire worlds. However very few people know how it is made. The picture shows how chocolate is manufactured.
Chocolate production is a complex process which include several stages. First, plating a cacao trees is a must-do step in order to produce the cocoa pods, the cacao tree is mostly grown in the South America, Africa and Indonesia. When the tree is riped and red then it is ready to be pods harvested. Next, after being collected the pods is separated to collect the white cocoa beans. Once the white beans is done removing then it is moving on to the fermentation step. In the next step, the beans is spread on a large tray so that they can get dry be the sun heat. Following from that the beans are put in a large sacks and is transported by train or lorry to the factory. On arrival in the factory the beans is roasted at a temperature of 350 degree for several hours. Afterwards the beans are crushed until the outer shell are removed. Finally, the inner part that is left of the beans are put into a special machine to pressed and the chocolate is produced.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rated to collect the white cocoa beans. Once the white beans is done removing then i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 7.0 329% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45893719807 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38223527914 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589371980676 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5806989687 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175863454215 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651117681652 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112483275591 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1446926594 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310934189937 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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