Climate change and its consequences are trouble all over the world, the most noticeable consequence is that global warming leads to awe-inspiring effects on marine animals.
climate change and its consequences are trouble all over the world, the most noticeable result is that global warming leads to awe-inspiring effects on marine animals. The first affected species are those living at the poles of the Earth, where there is abundant sea ice and the lowest temperatures. species that rely on low temperatures, such as narwhals, polar bears, and walruses, are usually poorly understood by humans due to the limitations of research tools and the human bodies’ ability to withstand the cold to enter their habitat. Because of climate change, those species are becoming extinct and human beings still lack of knowledge about them that is being destroyed every day. The second affected species is a species that lives near cold currents, taking corals as an illustration. coral reefs serve as nurseries for many fish, helping to offer refuge from predators and giving the fish a chance to grow. If the ocean temperature remains high for a long period, it will give rise to coral death. The destruction of those nurseries has brought about a series of other consequences: many fish die, reducing biodiversity, and the ocean fishing industry may completely collapse in the future. In conclusion, climate change brings about many undesirable consequences for marine animals and it also creates negative impacts on terrestrial organisms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Climate
climate change and its consequences are trouble...
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Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Species
...nt sea ice and the lowest temperatures. species that rely on low temperatures, such as ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Coral
...ents, taking corals as an illustration. coral reefs serve as nurseries for many fish,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, still, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23853211009 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78396154463 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660550458716 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8518831331 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.888888889 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254993965123 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117464193429 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.261924145659 0.0843802449381 310% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254993965123 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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