The stipulated bar chart illustrates the average monthly temperature and rainfall for a span of one year from January to December in the city of Kolkata. The mentioned parameters are in degree Celsius and millimeters.
The city face severe rainfall during the months of July and August, which is 330mm and 320mm agree respectively. December accounted for the driest month of the year recording 10mm of shower. From January to May there is a gradual increase of city's rainfall from 20mm to 100mm after which there is a steep rise in the precipltation till the month of August then it started to decline from September onwards.
Whereas the temperature figures highlight a completely different trend. In the month of January the rainfall temperature is just 2o degree celsius then it started to rise and reached a substantial amount of 32 degree celsius in May. Then the figures started to decline and reached the exact figure of January at the end of the year, which is 20 degree celsius.
To summarise, it is clear from the chart that there is no direct connection between the rainfall and temperature and it is purely seasonal. An interesting thing is that, during the months of July and August the temperature is considerably high despite the heavy showers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e in degree Celsius and millimeters. The city face severe temperature high durin...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d to decline from September onwards. Whereas the rainfall figures highlight a comple...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99082568807 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7160457104 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477064220183 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7868834832 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256794710106 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103602452796 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753432689768 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163439764699 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581016126763 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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