The given chart illustrate the information about average monthly temperatures and rainfall in urban area of KolKata.
After analyzing, it can be seen clearly that in the starting two months rainfall is insignificant and the temperature is less about 20°c. In march, rain is near 50mm and temperature is near 25°c. In the next month, storm nearly 50mm done and temperature around is 30°c. After that rainfall is increased half from previous month and temperature little bit increased from April month. In June, rainfall is almost 250mm and the temperature reduce nearly 1°c from previous month.
The picture further collates that July and August month rain fall near about 350mm and temperature is same nearly 28°c.Next month, storm is nearly 300mm and temperature is same as former month. In next, rainfall is dipped around 150 and temperature is same. Finally ,in last rainfall is little and temperature is nearly 20°c in last two months.
Overall, starting months and the last months rainfall is little bit and temperature is up and down, but in between months, rainstorm touch the peak level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...alf from previous month and temperature little bit increased from April month. In June, ra...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Next
...0mm and temperature is same nearly 28°c.Next month, storm is nearly 300mm and temper...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...und 150 and temperature is same. Finally ,in last rainfall is little and temperatu...
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Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'months'' or 'month's'?
Suggestion: months'; month's
... Overall, starting months and the last months rainfall is little bit and temperature ...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... months and the last months rainfall is little bit and temperature is up and down, but in ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17222222222 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61724456935 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494444444444 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0254798875 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213547336237 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110699904281 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530717107522 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165613712349 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519769971816 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.