compare two tables.
The given table chart compares the range of books and
non printed material preferred by different age group
available in local library.
Basically, age groups are divided in three categories
that is under 15, 15 to 39 and above 40.
with regards to range of books more then half percent
of learners of under 15 age group marked it very good.
15 to 39 and above age group marked very good just a
little more then quarter. However, one-tenth of above
40 group appreciated Non Print material.
In addition to that, approximately two-fourth of the
old age group felt satisfied with the variety of books
library have.
In contrast, 49 percentage of 15 to 39 age group were
in favor of non printed materials. Likewise, 19% of
the above 40 group marked it satisfactory.
But, an further point is that half of that group
did not mention any comments.
To conclude, young age group liked Non printed
material where as old age group were more at a side
of range of books.
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| 2022-08-30 | llkngocc | 100 | view |
| 2019-08-14 | shiv_mark42 | 46 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...le chart compares the range of books and non printed material preferred by differ...
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...aterial preferred by different age group available in local library. Basicall...
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...e groups are divided in three categories that is under 15, 15 to 39 and above 40....
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...to range of books more then half percent of learners of under 15 age group marked...
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... above age group marked very good just a little more then quarter. However, one-t...
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...p marked very good just a little more then quarter. However, one-tenth of above ...
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...hen quarter. However, one-tenth of above 40 group appreciated Non Print material...
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.... However, one-tenth of above 40 group appreciated Non Print material. In ad...
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...to that, approximately two-fourth of the old age group felt satisfied with the va...
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...felt satisfied with the variety of books library have. In contrast, 49 percent...
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...49 percentage of 15 to 39 age group were in favor of non printed materials. Likew...
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... non printed materials. Likewise, 19% of the above 40 group marked it satisfactor...
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...40 group marked it satisfactory. But, an further point is that half of that grou...
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...further point is that half of that group did not mention any comments. To conc...
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...clude, young age group liked Non printed material where as old age group were mor...
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... age group liked Non printed material where as old age group were more at a side of r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, then, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8488372093 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50629278326 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1776756534 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.4 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 3.83414634146 496% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0355079681034 0.215688989381 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0165166931056 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033039119088 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0151008698119 0.15604864568 10% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440878414177 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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