Describe the diagram about the hydroelectric dam
The given diagram describes how power is generated by the hydroelectric dam and supplied to the consumers.
Overall, it can be seen that the kinetic energy of the water is converted into electricity by the water moving through the power house.
The hydroelectric dam consists of various parts. These are the reservoir, intake, penstock, turbine, generator located in the power house and the long power cables connected to the generator.
The water from the reservoir which is at a higher level is allowed to enter the penstock through the intake. This water flows through the penstock to reach the turbines. The energy with which the turbine is rotated is converted by the generator into electricity. This water is then released into the river. The electricity is then distributed to the consumers through the long distance cables.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18382352941 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74633091187 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6499775283 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135933351788 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737032961521 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142867552422 0.0843802449381 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130995874183 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168110001724 0.0819641961636 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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