describe the table and pie chart below which shows the spending habits of teenagers in australia. the tqbke shows the amount of dollars spent on various activities per week while the pie chart shows the amount spent on education .

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describe the table and pie chart below which shows the spending habits of teenagers in australia. the tqbke shows the amount of dollars spent on various activities per week while the pie chart shows the amount spent on education .

The supplied tabular chart exhibits information about how much money spent on four acitivies per week,and the pie layout shows that the amount spent on education, it is clearly and coherently.

overall, it can be inferred that the highest amount of dollars was spent in food in the table chart whist the teenagers was spent the highest amount on education.

Primarily, it is vividly apparent that the highest statistical amount spent on food in three years, it was noticed at approximately 150. Whereas, the lowest dollars spent on cosmetic activities in all year, it accorded at 20 to 32 dollars. The clothes follow the food activitity and it was noticed at 100 to103 dollars. Moreover, the entertainment activity has been lead the second least amount from 2001, 2002 and 2003, it was accorded at 35, 40 and 45 respectively.

As far as, trend was concerned on books it was registered at more than half shows on upward trend while the membership shows the downward trend, it was noticed at a very small number. Furthermore, the amount has been spend on projects and internet, it was observed at less than a quarter.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...h money spent on four acitivies per week,and the pie layout shows that the amount sp...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...ation, it is clearly and coherently. overall, it can be inferred that the highest am...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...umber. Furthermore, the amount has been spend on projects and internet, it was observ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, second, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89005235602 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69117077747 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570680628272 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9718234353 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284540367923 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122561051755 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998196756536 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195532256619 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931870118245 0.0819641961636 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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