the diagram above shows the process of milk butter and cheese production

The diagram illustrates the different stages in the production of cheese.

Overall, there are several stages in cheese production, beginning with raw milk and ending with the final product of ripened cheese.

Initially, in the most common method nowadays,

raw milk undergoes pasteurisation and then standardisation and filtration before it enters a coagulation process. However, in traditional cheese making, the raw milk is coagulated directly. Next, fermenting micro-organisms are used to inoculate the milk in the coagulation tank and an enzyme, rennet, is also added. In the tank, the milk curdles to form curds and whey. Then, the curds and whey are cut before stirring and cooking.

In the next stage, the whey is drained and the curds are milled. The curds then pass along a conveyor belt for salting. After salting, some are used to produce cottage cheese and cream cheese. The rest is poured into moulds and pressed to drain additional whey. Finally, the resulting cheese is ripened for a time and the process is finished.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, so, then, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22023809524 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80982015185 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6922345158 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0833333333 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216185920259 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751332265103 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635073689619 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109864060578 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624193138629 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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