The diagram below explains the process of recyling plastic bottles for new users.

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The diagram below explains the process of recyling plastic bottles for new users.

The diagram given clearly depicts the various stages in recycling of plastic bottles and then its usage in new forms. The plastic bottles are collected in the recycling centre and are then segregated from other types of materials like glass and metal. Then the bottles are categorised according to specific colours. Later on, almost 7,000 plastic bottles are tied into each separate bundles and then these bales are pressed. These bales are then carried to reclaimer, where they are broken with the help of bale breaker. After breaking, the plastics are formed into small pieces like flakes. Flakes are then washed, rinsed and finally dried. These flakes are then melted and passed through extruder. Thus the pellets are formed.

The pellets thus produced are then sold out to the producers, which they use to make various products like fibres for carpets and clothing, non food containers and other products.

To summarise the whole process is divided into two major parts one in the recycling center and the other in reclaimer. In recycling center plastic bottles are sorted and bales are made, while in reclaimer the plastic bottles are crushed and flakes are used to make pellets.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 701, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...hen melted and passed through extruder. Thus the pellets are formed. The pellets ...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...n sold out to the producers, which they use to make various products like fibres fo...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, thus, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08673469388 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22090025872 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5707438796 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0833333333 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180396763552 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637838526057 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647415444949 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110015137606 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534335438511 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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