The diagram below show how instant noodles are manufactured.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives some information about the process of producing instant noodles by manufacturing.
It is obvious that, there are eight relevant and continuous steps during this process. The process starts by discharge of feed in storage silos and end by labelling and sealing.
As can be seen, all manufactures which produce noodles before that the process start by flour machines provide the first feed and raw material of mixers and store in storage silos in fact this is the first step. second step begin with add flour by a fewer oil and water in mixer. After that all materials completely mixed by rollers create dough sheets and after that in fourth step dough strips slice the green noodles. In fifth step all noodles provided in discs shape and cooked by oil. Not only in this stage cook noodles but also it is possible that they dry then cooked by cooker. It is important that change their taste by adding vegetables and spices this makes their get better taste and put they’re in cups. In final step all cups labeling and sealing. After all these steps instant noodles ready to sell in whole of the world and receive to consumers.
As a result, the process of producing noodles are complex and all manufactures follow a special structure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...e silos in fact this is the first step. second step begin with add flour by a fewer oi...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anufactures follow a special structure.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, after all, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79723502304 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36091364267 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.254966031 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109151511222 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450411241113 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504215996287 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904038266906 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057886081076 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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