The diagram below show how leather goods are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

Since many centuries ago, leather goods are used by human as clothes. It is inevitable that leather goods is one of the oldest craft in mankind. Nowadays leather goods is essentially used as fashion items such as jackets, boots, belts, wallets, phone case, and bags. The cycle below illustrated the clear sequences of leather goods. Undergoes plenty of steps from the animal skins until the final products.

Firstly, the process starts from drying the animal skins, then they brought to the factory by the truck. On arrival, the second step is washing them with lime water to eliminate all dirty and vanish the smell. After having been cleaned, the next step is soaking the leather in the water with vegetable matter, then they flattened with the machine before they are submerged in the lime water. After that, the leather is polished before transported to the last factory to produce the final products and ready to ship worldwide. In short, making leather goods is a complex process which need many chemical things and machines.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun step seems to be countable; consider using: 'plenty of steps'.
Suggestion: plenty of steps
...r sequences of leather goods. Undergoes plenty of step from the animal skins until the final p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, so, then, in short, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26001951217 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612716763006 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2607647317 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124185348152 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539892299013 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453327503156 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101114532782 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385779423759 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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