The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant
The illustration demostrates the process for produsing leather goods.
In general, the animal skin pases through several stages involving machines and factories to be ready to use leather product. Animal skin passes through several stages beginning with drying and ending with transforming to be a ready to use product.
In the first stage, animal skin is dried, in open air. After being transported to a factory by a special Nehicle, the skin is washed in a mixture of water and lime. In the next stage the washed skin is soaked in a liquid form lime for a period of time.
Once the soaking stage ends, special technology is used to flatten the material in the next stage. Afterwards the skin undergoes soaking once again but this time in tannin - water and vegetable matter. Before the special lorry transports the material to factory it passes through the polishing process. Finally, following the treatment in factory, the material that was once an animal skin is now ready for consumption by customers in the forms of products such as bag, shoes and ball.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...n is soaked in a liquid form lime for a period of time. Once the soaking stage ends, special...
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Line 4, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...in tannin - water and vegetable matter. Before the special lorry transports the materi...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, so, in fact, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90555555556 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55510377371 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0720425738 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0145583920189 0.215688989381 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00815665268645 0.103423049105 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0167074999696 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0165959888214 0.15604864568 11% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199505446706 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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