The diagram below show how an office building look at present and the plan for its future development.
The provided maps give information about the current look and planned development of an office building.
As can be seen that, in the present layout there are a vast amount of area on the left and right side covered with the grass. However, entrance is on the south-east side and the reception is in the front of the entrance. There are four offices located on the south wall. On the opposite, a kitchen, canteen and stock room can be seen. Moreover, wash room is situated between the stock room and the reception.
Looking at the future plan of office building, the grass area of the left side converted into the outdoor activity area. The entrance and reception are estimated to removed in the centre and the offices on the south wall increased and proposed to locate on the left and right side of the reception. Furthermore, kitchen, canteen and wash room planned to remove from the future development. New facility of meeting area will be constructed on the south-east side and there would be coffee machine on the north-east side.
Overall, some major changes are projected for the future layout of the office building.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
... in the present layout there are a vast amount of area on the left and right side cove...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87628865979 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52095058214 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505154639175 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1174442185 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174838843531 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709313679991 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723997328248 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124247953067 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536445680978 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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