The diagrams below illustrate the process of a sizable kind of fish called Salmon’s whole life.
That is vividly apparent that Salmons have to pass three significant stages in their life period to become adult salmon from eggs. Furthermore, their size and bigness changes in each level remarkably.
At the first level, eggs are lain near small stones protecting by reeds, which are located in upper river with slow water speed, for approximately 6 months. Then eggs turn to fry, which length is around 3 to 8 cm. Now these creatures are able to live in lower river which has own faster water than upper river. After passing approx4 years, their growth is still continuous, and fry is turned into smolt, which length is 12 to 15 cm. In the next last part 5 years old smolts are considered as long (70 to 76 cm )adult salmos,which are able to breed continue the cycle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 521, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...sidered as long 70 to 76 cm adult salmos,which are able to breed continue the cycle. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, still, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67532467532 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45959077427 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.746753246753 0.547539520022 136% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5515451286 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0842623328493 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416457876296 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820488231883 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104572700737 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103061841024 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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