The stipulated bar chart depicts average hours of activities like childcare, housework and gardening done by both married women and married men in various perspectives. The mentioned parameters are without children, with 1-2 children and with 3+ children.
It is clear from the data that, married women usually spends more time to do unpaid work than married men in all categories. Married women with no children, with 1-2 children and with 3+ children utilize an average of 30, 52, 58 hours per week to carry out such activities. The average hours taken by the women to do no income jobs is almost par despite the number of juveniles, which is 52 and 58 hours respectively. A detailed view of the data shows that, families with children dedicated almost similar hours to engage in unpaid work regardless of gender. The men spent an average of 20 hours per week to do unpaid work in almost all the categories.
In conclusion, married women always take the responsibility of the family and contributes much of their time to do house work than those of married men and their average time dedicated to such jobs showed an increasing trend based on the number of children.
- The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Some people prefer to settle down and start a family in a rural area. Other people prefer the convenience of the big city. Which do you prefer ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 73
- Some people consider price as most important thing to consider when buying a product (such as a cell phone) or a service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree? 89
- Nowadays in some countries the numbers of children aged 15 and younger are increasing What are the current and future effects of ever increasing population 59
- Many people believe that educational standards have declined in recent times, particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy.Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...s per week to carry out such activities.A detailed view of the data shows that, f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93063583815 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65469625549 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531791907514 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5956192539 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.166666667 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190538433778 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114009087884 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796636675186 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11717163471 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053058919571 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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