In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Providing health care for elderly people has been an ongoing project in different countries. In some countries, such as Britain, there are facilities with medical staff provided for old people who are unable to take care of themselves. The cost of this care sometimes is within the responsibilities of the government, and sometimes the family is obligated to pay in order to benefit from the care. I believe the government’s role, in this case, must be more prominent.
To begin with, elderly people were used to be part of the society that were beneficial for their communities. They have put their effort and youth working for different corporates within various areas. By providing a suitable environment for this group, the government would cherish their efforts and prevent them from the feeling of being a burden on the shoulders of the rest of society.
On the other hand, some might believe that because these people have previously given birth to their children, taken care of their own family, and supported them financially until they grow up and stand on their own feet, now it is within their children’s responsibility to pay off their endless efforts and show their gratitude. However, there are lots of cases that once the parents get older and become unable to be financially independent, they become abandoned by their own children. Knowing that this kind of health care is available by the government’s support is relieving for senior citizens in order to spend the rest of their life happily and stress-free.
In conclusion, even though it is the moral duty of the families to take care of the elderly people once they need help, the support of this group by the government must be an obligation to each country’s health law.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
...re of themselves. The cost of this care sometimes is within the responsibilities of the gove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99319727891 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7843912202 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534013605442 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8042126177 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.454545455 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290210559653 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122071730974 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588913215088 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189280438067 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886130328951 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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