The diagram below shows changes to one university campus

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows changes to one university campus.

The given maps illustrate the transformations which one university campus has experienced over a period of 33 years from 1985 to the present time (2018).
Overall, the university campus has gone through significant alternation

In 1985, the university grounds had various sites. To the northwest, was a library. Car park, physics and biology blocks were situated in the north east, and to the south east was an admin building. Also, another car park was located in south west.

Remarkable changes has accrued today. Firstly, a number of buildings are repurposed. While the south-western car park has become a bust terminal, albeit in smaller size, the other car park has been replaced with a circular-shaped lecture theatre. Moreover, the library has been enlarged to the south, converting to a library and IT center. Secondly, some sites are completely demolished. Although physics and chemistry blocks have been overhauled in order to make room for a spacious science laboratory, the biology block has been pulled down so that a new addition, footpaths, can be be put in which connect the different areas instead of the roads. This has resulted in reducing the size of some building, such as the admin building.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 333, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'centers'?
Suggestion: centers
...e south, converting to a library and IT center. Secondly, some sites are completely de...
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Line 6, column 583, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: be
... so that a new addition, footpaths, can be be put in which connect the different area...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... building, such as the admin building.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17676767677 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86636073709 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641414141414 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.952546781 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4166666667 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104787826672 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366686713474 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652011956923 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938779657694 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700349209585 0.0819641961636 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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