The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.
The diagram demonstrate how coffee manufactured and arranged for sale in markets and shops.
Overall, the process consist of 11 stages. Begin with collecting the coffee beans, and end up with packing into containers.
First of all, the farmers gather the coffee beans, and dry them in the sunshine. The next step
is roasted the beans for a period of time, then cool them rapidly, and grind the beans in a special grinder. The following stage is put the beans in hot water, and mix them together. After that the mixture strained and put into a freezer. In the next stage, the coffee and water mixture grinded in the special grinder, and dry in a vacuum until the water steams. Finally, after the beans drought from water, it packs inside jars and prepared for sale.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... dry them in the sunshine. The next step is roasted the beans for a period of tim...
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Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... next step is roasted the beans for a period of time, than cool them rapidly, and grind the ...
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Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...roasted the beans for a period of time, than cool them rapidly, and grind the beans ...
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Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l them rapidly, and grind the beans in a special grinder. The following stage is ...
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Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eezer. In the next stage, the coffee and water mixture grinded in the special gri...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...y in a vacuum until the water steams. Finally. After the beans drought from water, it...
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Line 11, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beans'' or 'bean's'?
Suggestion: beans'; bean's
... the water steams. Finally. After the beans drought from water, it packs inside jar...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 648.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2781360754 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57037037037 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 183.6 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3907016921 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 3.83414634146 235% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195835359522 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822876308877 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122748863506 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830660223455 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121705212076 0.0819641961636 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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