This graph features the making of electricity throughout a hydroelectric power station. As can be seen from the diagram, there are ten stages all together both at day and night from taken water on a river to turned for a national grid.
From the starting point, water is pumped from a river to a high-level reservoir. During the daytime, the Dam is opened so that water can flowed to creating electricity. In the next stage, water is sent to a power station, where reversible turbines is operated, letting it to a low-level reservoir.
At night, the storage water is pumped into a high-level reservoir. The dam is closed during this time to prevent water from flowing out of the process. The water is sent to the generator, then throughout the power lines, it is delievered to large area and houses and many other places nationally.
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- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both these views and give your o 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78620689655 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7247402215 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6075898209 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10211065134 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583677114986 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100074639566 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803703423862 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638366372272 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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