The diagram represents process of creating ethanol fuel from corn, which consist of nine steps. These are corn, storing, milling, cooking, fermenting, separating, purifying ethanol, storing and transporting.
It is clear from the chart that the initial product is corn, which after storing undergoes to a milling process. Subsequently, it has to be cooking for four hours and for this time necessary to add water. When the cooking has been done, it transfers for fermenting for forty eight hours. The result of fermenting is solid by-product and liquid. Thereafter the liquid will be purifying into the ethanol for five hours. Finally, ethanol fuel is ready for using and after another storing it will transport to a local market or gas station.
Overall, process of preparing the qualitative ethanol fuel is very long. Some of the steps consumed more time, among them cooking, fermenting and purifying. Finally, after this, ethanol produced from corn.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 271, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: forty-eight
...n done, it transfers for fermenting for forty eight hours. The result of fermenting is soli...
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Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thereafter,
...menting is solid by-product and liquid. Thereafter the liquid will be purifying into the e...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... qualitative ethanol fuel is very long. Some of the steps consumed more time, among them co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28289473684 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6345295958 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618421052632 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7187126538 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.0 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8181818182 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25625088004 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106308513665 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116661741767 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212185093652 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885808597542 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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