The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn

The diagram illustrates the production of ethanol fuel from corn.
Overall, there are a total of 9 distinct steps to generate ethanol fuel, starting from harvesting main material and ending with shipping process to consumer pots.
At the initial stages, corn after being planted on farms is collected with an aim to storing before entering the official production process. Following that, the main material is milled and then mixed with water to create a corn-water texture. At the point of the stage, the mentioned texture experiences cooking period for about 4 hours at a high temperature, and then immediately be fermented during a 2-day period.
Next, the corn mixture is sorted into 2 categories, including liquid and solid parts. After 5 hours being purified ethanol, the solid mixture continues to be stored in the pattern of jar at the chamber. Finally, ethanol fuel is transported to markets where consumers have a demand for using this kind of fuel.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 22, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'totals'?
Suggestion: totals
...l fuel from corn. Overall, there are a total of 9 distinct steps to generate ethanol...
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Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ending with shipping process to consumer pots. At the initial stages, corn after...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09493670886 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66539870646 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677215189873 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1949925416 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218557968896 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116857640781 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139645345858 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195882803803 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16040817589 0.0819641961636 196% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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