The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
There are a lot of natural various ways to produce renewable energy such as sunlight, water, wind, etc. Geothermal energy is also one of the natural source of electricity generation which is shown in the given picture. Geothermal energy is produced through hot rocks and there are mainly 5 stages to this, which I'll discuss in detail.
According to the diagram, firstly stored cold water from the ground surface is pumped up to 4.5 km underground to the injection well. Further, injection well releases this cold water to the hot rocks which are scattered underground covering some area. This is done underground so that these hot rocks don't lose their heat. This is known as a Geothermal Zone which warms the water and passes it to the production well, the third stage.
Hot water is then pumped upwards from the production well to the condenser which is at the ground level. The condenser, turbine and generator are connected to each other. The condenser starts producing steam which passes to the turbine. This leads to the generation of turbine because of steam.
Finally, the turbine engine starts and powers up the generator which is connected to it. Thus, generator produces electricity and extracts it to the power towers for the last consumption.
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... power towers for the last consumption.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, so, then, third, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00473933649 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56683094499 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54028436019 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1470728657 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2307692308 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829784951531 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339596109491 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420011876532 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548783598506 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557116382489 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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