At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages ?
The number of younger generation exceeds the population of old-age crowd in some countries in recent times. There is a healthy discussion and argument whether the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages. I will discuss both the matter in this essay but I believe that young people are more beneficial in today's time.
The world has changed a lot over the time. Earlier, the world was very limited to things and there wasn't much development and exposure. Today, there is so much to do, to learn and to work. Therefore, people then were lethargic and eased because there was hardly any competition. But as and when the world started developing, younger generation evolved fast and they too started developing a sense of intelligence at an early age. For instance, what people used to study at the age of 16, now study at the age of 10 or 12 because of their early adaptive quality. There is a very well-known example of Facebook founder and owner Mark Zuckerberg who was a genius mind in his teenage. There are many such young people who have invented and improved human life in every possible ways. The more young crowd leads to fast development of country because they are quick problem solvers, open-minded, enthusiastic and technology friendly. A young political representative will be more effective than the older one because he understands the young crowd like no other. In my country, after the selection of a new state government, there has been immense changes in my city (Mumbai).
Older people in this century will be less effective but we can't ignore them completely. There is a wise saying that sometimes experience is more important than knowledge. It is them who show the younger ones the real qualities of life which can be taught only after the years of experience. For example, you could be smart to invent a useful device but wouldn't understand how to get it in the market by talking and connecting with right type of people. So, I believe that no one can teach us soft skills like an elder or experienced man who has seen more life than us. Some people assert that older people are orthodox in nature, but I feel sometimes it is the orthodox thinking that help keep up our relations in today's materialistic world. The young ones have known how to make human life easy and how to develop their economy but keeping good relations with people, showing love to loved ones and respecting everyone are some things which only our elders can teach.
In the end, I would like to reiterate that older people are of importance too, but in this century the advantages of having younger crowd more will be more helpful for the development of the economy.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 465.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77634408602 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60109816096 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524731182796 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 715.5 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4378982351 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.954545455 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1363636364 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179765083279 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484047757735 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477582347872 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122573284678 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074623508748 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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