The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced. Summarize the important information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the way to produce orange juice. This report will provide a brief description of the main stages in such progress.
This man-made linear process starts with the fresh orange collection then brings it to the factory and finishes with the distribution to the marketplace.
To begin with, as can be referred from the diagram, after being transported to the factory, oranges are extracted into two parts, while the solid water becomes animal feed, the fresh juice is brought to the next stage. There are two ways to make this juice become a commercial product. First, orange mẹ juice is packaged and then delivered to the supermarket for sale. Second, this juice can be transported to an evaporation place by refrigerated trucks to remove water. At this point in the process, this concentrated juice is canned and stored in the warehouse. The next step is adding water to the concentrated juice and packaging it. Ultimately, this product is served to customers in the market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, so, then, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07228915663 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71985116531 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620481927711 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6029410856 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143727931927 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650376421202 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465397742735 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102673659066 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598288155097 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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