the pictures illustrates the produced process of natural fertiliser.overall, this produce consist of 5 the stages,starting the plastic blank containers with 2m3 lengths to the last stages,which becomes to be perfect production and ready for usage
in the first step, it can be seen that the given plastic container has the hight 2m3 and its beside was dig the 4 blank hole with the distance is similarly each other,it may be the air to be in an out flows more easily.
from the second stages to the end of this process have to need 4 stages to be completed products.the container in this stages was added newspaper, glass and food with the consume of this by 30cm compare to the height of the container.
to the next stages,it is noticeable that the nitrogens power is added along with hot water at the same times. after this the stages,may be due to the affection of nitrogen and hot water in the 4 stages, after the periof of time this substannce automatcly heat and the air can be seen go out of the holes in 2 sides of the container. and then,throughout about 6 months,this mixture is transformed into the completed compost and this time which is ready to use in the garden.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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the pictures illustrates the produced process of natural fertili...
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...ll, this produce consist of 5 the stages,starting the plastic blank containers with 2m3 ...
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...ners with 2m3 lengths to the last stages,which becomes to be perfect production and re...
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...perfect production and ready for usage in the first step, it can be seen that t...
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...fect production and ready for usage in the first step, it can be seen that the...
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...irst step, it can be seen that the given plastic container has the hight 2m3 and ...
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...r to be in an out flows more easily. from the second stages to the end of this pr...
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...as added newspaper, glass and food with the consume of this by 30cm compare to the height o...
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...mpare to the height of the container. to the next stages,it is noticeable that t...
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...t of the container. to the next stages,it is noticeable that the nitrogens power ...
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...along with hot water at the same times. after this the stages,may be due to the affec...
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...at the same times. after this the stages,may be due to the affection of nitrogen and...
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... the holes in 2 sides of the container. and then,throughout about 6 months,this mix...
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...es in 2 sides of the container. and then,throughout about 6 months,this mixture is transfo...
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...iner. and then,throughout about 6 months,this mixture is transformed into the comple...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, second, similarly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62085308057 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88944096202 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54028436019 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.317869916 43.030603864 296% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.0 112.824112599 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.2 22.9334400587 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0194852056407 0.215688989381 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0107940267345 0.103423049105 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0132879681006 0.0843802449381 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.013653008527 0.15604864568 9% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170874516684 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.4329268293 241% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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