The diagram shows circulation of Earth's water by water cycle.
Overall, water cycle constitutes three main steps i.e. evaopartion, clouds formation and rain. The poured down water gets evaporated again and the cycle continues.
To begin, sun's heat causes formation of water vapours from water bodies like river, lakes and seas. Also, trees contribute to vapour formation in atmosphere by transpiration process. This evaporated water condense into clouds due to low temperature and wind. Moreover, the clouds are moved around the globe by air currents.
A further fall in temperature, as a result, precipitates clouds into rain water falling on the ground. The porous rocks underneath the surface of earth receives this poured water, absorb it and returns it to water reservoirs to get evaporated again. Hence, the cycle goes on repeating itself.
- Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so. 67
- The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The graph below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel to school in 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 11
- Some people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as tv, friends and music. Others believe that family still remains very important.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tutes three main steps i.e. evaopartion, clouds formation and rain. The poured do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, moreover, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38345864662 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70862509318 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669172932331 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4670711944 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252356837638 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105637132328 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948260973187 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19168775354 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986888120343 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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