The diagram depicts the circulation of Earth's water by water cycle.
Overall, the water cycle has three main steps including evaporation, clouds formation and rain. The poured down water goes into air again and cycle continues.
To begin, sun rays triggers evaporation. In this process, a massive amount of water from water bodies like rivers, lakes and seas is converted into water vapours. Also, different flora of earth contributes to vapour formation in atmosphere by transpiration process. These vapours are condensed into clouds by wind and low temperature of earth's atmosphere. Moreover, air current moves clouds around the globe where a further fall in temperature causes cooling effect and precipitation.
As a result of precipitation of clouds, rain pours down. The rain water falls on ground and is absorbed by huge porous rocks underneath earth surface. Subsequently, these rocks return water to rivers and lakes from where it is partially streamed into ocean and eventually evaporated to ensure continuation of water cycle.
- The graph below shows the consumption of three spreads from 1981 to 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty and the bar chart shows poverty rates by sex and age. They are from the United States in 2008. 78
- The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.What are the causes of this continued rise?Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity? 84
- Some children find learning history at school very exciting, but many others think it is very boring. In what ways can history be brought to life for all school children? 84
- The diagram below shows how the water cycle works. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tation. As a result of precipitation of clouds, rain pours down. The rain water ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41975308642 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85478978593 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3950549845 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8181818182 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186699078402 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739149131575 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792991402079 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147636098121 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692719876229 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.