The diagram below shows information about member attendance at various clubs in a metro city.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart reveals information on visits of members to four clubs in a metro city for a seven month period.
It is clearly seen from the graph that the number of visits to French club had been almost constant in the first six months, amounting to around 60,000. However, in the month of July , they increased to almost 78,000. The most regularity in number of visits was also seen in the case of British club where, member’ s visits again remained in the range of around 60,000.
Japanese club observed nearly 39,000 visitors in January and that increased to about 47,000 in April, but after that , the visits decreased and remained steady at about 43,000. Finally, the clear winner in terms of number of visitors was the American club , with nearly 80,000 visitors for the first four months, and then the numbers soared to nearly 97,000 in June and settled at about 85,000 in July.
In conclusion , the bar chart shows that the entry to all the club remained almost steady with an exception of the American club, which saw a handsome rise in visits in the last two months.
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- The diagram below shows information about member attendance at various clubs in a metro city.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- Some people think that the only way to relax is by rest or sleep, while others say they need to do exercise or sport to relax . Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n a metro city over a period of 7 months , commencing from the month of january. ...
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Suggestion:
...people visit American club and which was accounted at 81,000 in january. With the...
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... the peak record of 98,000 by june. Then the number of visitors to American club ...
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...rly seen that the number of people visit to french club was almost same and was a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01709401709 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62124205559 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495726495726 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 346.5 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7388167126 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.727272727 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108315492488 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573074704409 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381763390975 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690775453692 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139328697113 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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