the bar graph below demonstrate knowledge about student attendance in multiple school
Overall, there are four school show in the graph but seven oaks school attendance upward trend others second last year.
the page hill downward trend follow than seven oaks
firstly, The Royal latin upward trend than page hill in year 2001 but didcot few downward trend than seven oaks 5% same year. In year of 2003 approximatly same as the first school attendance as well as few up trend than seven oaks same year .
secondly , In the year of 2006 the upward follow trend almost 950% student attendance moreover the others school downward trend than seven oaks and last one is page hill school in the year of 2007 upward trend than others years
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 615.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 126.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88095238095 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08625933847 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 59.0 106.607317073 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468253968254 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 165.6 283.868780488 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.9940471972 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.75 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.25 5.23603664747 310% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165936332379 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13729951423 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13430436866 0.0843802449381 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141688879585 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128180568164 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 40.7170731707 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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