Essay topics
The diagram represent information about the life cycle a frog.
It is clear that, the first step is eggs are layer on water. Then, eggs are converted into embryo. The next stride is they change into tadpole. Moving the stride, the front defines break through. After that, the tadpole is long eggs.
Moving further, the next stage is the start of pulmonary and breathing and toad is jumped into water in outside. next, the tadpole frog change to them. then, they ready to adult frog form and toad provide more eggs.
Overall, all stride are mandatory to this whole process. on the contrary one stride is missing underwater is not complete the process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he life cycle a frog . It is clear that,the first step is eggs are laye on water. T...
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Suggestion: , eggs
...rst step is eggs are laye on water. Then,eggs are converted into embryo.the next ste...
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Suggestion:
...is eggs are laye on water. Then,eggs are converted into embryo.the next step is t...
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Suggestion:
...ing the step, they development the front lemines break through. After that,the ta...
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...front lemines break through. After that,the tadpole is long eggs. Moving further, ...
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...rog is jumped into water in outside.next,the tadpole frog change to them .then,they ...
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...ide.next,the tadpole frog change to them .then,they ready to adult frog form and f...
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...xt,the tadpole frog change to them .then,they ready to adult frog form and frog provi...
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...orm and frog provide more eggs. Overall,all steps are mandatory to this whole proce...
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...teps are mandatory to this whole process .but one step is missing underwater is no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 538.0 965.302439024 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 105.0 196.424390244 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12380952381 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.20108587294 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65635987302 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685714285714 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 160.2 283.868780488 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.7536225621 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8571428571 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161018845324 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854354439975 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157428357409 0.0843802449381 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149512026996 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183823920361 0.0819641961636 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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