The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon from egg to adult fish

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The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.

The given graph depicts the salmon's life cycle, originating with eggs and culminating with adult fish. Overall, it can be seen that there are eight main stages within the life cycle of a salmon, distributed over three different locations.

To begin with, the life cycle starts with eggs, which are produced and left in the river. Afterward, the eggs incubate for a while, allowing their development. Followed by the emergence phase, where the small fish emerge, then they develop to freshwater rearing. In this stage, freshwater salmon migrate to an estuary and spent some time in the estuary to grow into estuary rearing.

After they are big enough, they travel to the ocean. The next journey that estuary rearing has to endure will be migration to the rearing areas. Upon arrival to rearing areas, the estuary rearing encounters their growth and maturation. Following this, the salmons travel for the last time to the spawning areas, so they return to the river for reproductive purposes. The final step in the life cycle is spawning, where the salmons deposit their eggs in the river, and then the lifecycle restarts again for the next generation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'salmons'' or 'salmon's'?
Suggestion: salmons'; salmon's
The given graph depicts the salmons life cycle, originating with eggs and c...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... estuary to grow into estuary rearing. After they are big enough, they travel t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while, as to, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02604166667 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42056416138 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2492847974 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212864928246 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778934963716 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797388827563 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165486279103 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843497814157 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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