The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish
The chart describes the growing process of a salmon, from egg to maturation. It is clearly seen that this life cycle has 8 stages occurred in both fresh and salt water.
The first step commences with the spawning of salmon which is the foundation for incubation. Over the time, those eggs transform to little salmon fishes by the by the emergence. They keep existing in fresh water until they're grow enough to lead to the estuary.
In the estuary rearing, they continue the development day by day to a certain time, those fishes get older, leave the estuary rearing and head to salt water. Here is where they migrate to rearing areas and reach the growth and maturation.
This process relays many times and becomes this life cycle.
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- The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish 56
- Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'by the'.
Suggestion: by the
... eggs transform to little salmon fishes by the by the emergence. They keep existing in fresh ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...They keep existing in fresh water until theyre grow enough to lead to the estuary. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 613.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 128.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7890625 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31354231155 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6328125 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 183.6 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0436568348 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.625 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185076104268 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798345252129 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745984430291 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108454022774 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779672509085 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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