The diagram describes the process required in the production of canned pear starting from the pear orchard. Overall, there are 14 stages to the production cycle that comprises of picking, selection, processing, and packaging segments of the supply chain.
The first stage of canned pear production begins with the picking of pears from a pear tree. These pears are subsequently transported by truck to a processing center where they are washed, checked for blemishes, and placed into cold storage. A selection of these pears, once they have passed weighing and grading, will be peeled, have their corks removed, and then sliced in order to prepare a stock that can be used for the canned product.
Production is completed when the pear is placed in cans and the cans are sealed. Before leaving the production facility, all cans are cooked and sterilized with heat, then labeled. Lastly, cans are dispatched from storage as orders come in.
- The diagram shows the small scale production of smoked fish 73
- The diagram below shows the multistage production of pears as canned fruits Write a report for a university lecturer the process below 56
- The diagram below shows the multistage production of pears as canned fruits Write a report for a university lecturer the process below 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... 14 stages to the production cycle that comprises of picking, selection, processing, and pac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, lastly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09677419355 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55858311466 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61935483871 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0399735371 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257601341459 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123562374828 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757532545684 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182395382496 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159634683073 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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