The diagram illustrates the procedure of canning of fish. It is manifest from the graph that various types of steps are involved from the initial catching stage to a final dispatch to supermarkets.
Overall, it is clear that canning of fish is a lengthy and tedious process involving 15 steps. Each step is very important to maintain the freshness of the fish and to make it consumable for a long time.
To begin with, fish are caught and then frozen or stored in the next step. Then, they are unloaded and weighted before being thawed. After thawing, they are cut into big pieces and then are steam cooked. After cooked, these are cooled and then filleting or cut into small pieces.
Nextly, these pieces are canner with the help of added brine, water or oil in the cans. Afterthat, the cans are sealed and then sterlizing by heating. In the next stage, stamping or labelling is done on the cans before stored them. Lastly, fishes are finally dispatch to the supermarket for sale.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'dispatched'.
Suggestion: dispatched
...stored them. Lastly, fishes are finally dispatch to the supermarket for sale.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, lastly, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72832369942 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34936790505 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601156069364 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9218176029 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.1666666667 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12191654219 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494738323086 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704366142543 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795877962485 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606680431212 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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