In the era of modernisation, individuals are more conscious about the quality products because of the growth of consumerism which has led to many organizations to improving their services for the buyers. Consumers have a option to satisfy their needs by purchasing a calibre products at low-cost in these days. I will discuss pros and cons of cheaper consumer goods in the upcoming paragraph.
There are numerous benefits of economical commodities. To begin with, individuals can fulfill the basic demands of family members especially who belong to a impoverished communities and also lead a more comfortable life. The problem of starvation and other diseases are controlled by the availability of low- priced goods. For exemplify, according to the report of food and agriculture organization, yhe less severe condition of undernourishment currently effects about 8.42 million people or about 12.5% people in the world population.
Moreover, entrepreneurs can expand their own business at national and international level by providing cheaper products. Furthermore, government should be doing more investment on the development of education and health care faclities rather than on food expenditure by starting a mid-e-meal scheme.
On the other hand, cheaper priced goods are not more only beneficial but it has some drawbacks. Firstly, buyers never understand the quality of branded products because it is not easy to know the difference between better and defective goods. In addition, individuals take keen interest in buying unwanted items at this price. Secondly, manufactures are suffer more losses due to the selling of branded products at lower prices. So, in this case, manufatures produced a inferior quality products which is very harmful for human life.
To sum up, cheaper priced goods are in favour of society and goverenment should be fixed the rate of each and every product to maintain the balance in economy. Both individuals and government should be doing more effort to overcome the problems of starvation and undernourishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...services for the buyers. Consumers have a option to satisfy their needs by purcha...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...family members especially who belong to a impoverished communities and also lead ...
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Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
... this price. Secondly, manufactures are suffer more losses due to the selling of brand...
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Line 7, column 469, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... So, in this case, manufatures produced a inferior quality products which is very...
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Line 7, column 488, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'product'?
Suggestion: product
...manufatures produced a inferior quality products which is very harmful for human life. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48113207547 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11921312617 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3187583733 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.9375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105424674053 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361420535349 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487413887261 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588597264492 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336869276307 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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