The diagram below shows the process for making a water clock.
The given layout depicts the information about which making a water clock by process.It is clear and coherent representation.
In summarize, that which product that go for marketing is a water clock.
To begin with, the equipment of used for making products. On moving, that : stand, plastic bottle, tape, glue, tape, straw, instrument for maintenance constant level, plastic bottle with head cut, measuring instrument of level per minute, water.
Firstly, the stand stood on place and, two bottle are used as well as, one half bottle stood above the stand although, cut on the bottom and, minor hole also created in the bottom centre moreover, another bottle is above cut head through water flow from above bottle in below bottle . Before this above bottle has tape and, glue with straw. Futhermore, cover the hole with finger till the water not fulfill after that finger away from it.nextly, below the bottle presence of measurement instrument for leveling per minute according to requirement. Finally, this is the process repeat again and again for necessity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
...t which making a water clock by process.It is clear and coherent representation. ...
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Suggestion:
.... In summarize, that which product that go for marketing is a water clock. To...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, one half bottle stood above the stand although, cut on the bottom and, minor h...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r flow from above bottle in below bottle . Before this above bottle has tape and, ...
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Message: Use simply 'repeat'.
Suggestion: repeat
...quirement. Finally, this is the process repeat again and again for necessity.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is is the process repeat again and again for necessity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, moreover, so, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20930232558 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48273201348 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633720930233 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.014744735 43.030603864 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235027230225 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123090791861 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796313452088 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177450681994 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581658297811 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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