Analysts tells us that many people full stress and think they have insufficient control over live ? What people do such felling cause for people what remedies company suggest.
"Live is god gift to us"nowadays people have mostly busy life . They have free time for enjoyment.In this essay that should people keep controls on our stress or not ? through this topic. There are some issues which are irrevocable and complex. I shall range up my point of view in the following subsections.
Firstly, that everyone spend all life in work because without work anyone no spend our with proper facilities. Although, that is why they are do work , business for fullfil every needs. Futhermore, people have hustle-bustle life . They have not time for relaxation , and that is the reason they are suffer from many difficult status that is not suitable . Nextly, they always only concentrate on work no on health . Futhermore, their have mentally potential low level , and they are quickly hyper on any simple reason because are realize work as a more burden.
Secondly, when people spending all time in work then they should keep separated time for enjoyment like they are go on picnics in everyone weekend as well as every morning go in park for exercises because expertise is very beneficial for free from any types of stress, tensions, worries. However, when people are do this type of activities then their mind automatically changed from negative point of views moreover, they think positive , and feel well. Furthermore, they are do any work no any burden because with proper concentration as well as interested.
To sum up, that there is no single conculsion to this statement still, that this is dependent upon person to person thinking. However, when people think positive then automatically they are do any without any difficulty. Subsequently, health have main impact on people live. Because without health not any thing is possible.finaly be positive , and do work proper interest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13175675676 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81178149389 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530405405405 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.118227735 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236982996325 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842582343779 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746003183027 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159974804184 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205026814703 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.