Some people believe that preserving natural environment is curical. However most make no effort to do so.what do you think this is happening .what are some action that could help the environment
" The natural environment sustain the life all being universally" the first step is understanding why incline of pollutant broadly speaking. There are some reason to this essay that nowadays should efforts of preserve environment importance , or not through this topic. I share explore my point of views into following paragraphs. There are some case and solutions including in.
In summary, their is no single to answer to this question. There are group of people Believe that 'sustainability of world is not the responsiblity of government because it is the duty of people ' .
In first step , that people believe that sustainable of natural environmental damaged dramatically incline into pollution. However, it is most important cause of transportation like vehicles because into all world of transportation increase rapidly from past decade. Moreover, the mostly people are their own vehicle for go from one place to another place . Regarding this, through the use of everyone have own vehicles they can incline the rate of pollution. Subsequently, they can use one vehicle in one family. For epitome, go Green go clean awareness compus develop about government. However, they can reduce pollution through this rule with the help of people
On other step, the people increase the effort of pollution to environment through deforestation moreover, they reduce the quantity of environment. However, through setting the industry, factory, company . Whereas, these all factor effect the environment due to it damage the all universe. Moreover, As a solution these a the factory and other thing like this also setup far away from citizen area. However, we can reduce the amount of pollutant through this efforts for example, some suitable law also puts by government by proper authorities which is following to this law for sustainable natural environmental free from any type of impurities because this.is not the responsiblity either politics or any one person Because it is the responsibility for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, broadly speaking, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40952380952 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04363449473 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530158730159 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.9185971546 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.235294118 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180555468966 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579433177738 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556384002613 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123747747428 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405377027016 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.