Some people think that only the society be blamed for any anti social behaviour. What is the cause antitires . Who is responsible for them cause.
" I am not anti social. I am selectively social. There is a difference". A term used to describe people exhibiting any sort of behaviour in which intent is to violate the rights of others and otherwise going against society. It is the undoubtedly the case of anti social. There are some cause . Which we are explained from various same into the following paragraphs.
In summary, nevertheless, weighing both the option. There is no single answers to this question. Still, I believe that anti social like unacceptable activities are only controlled by government. Because it through politics puts some sticks legal for improvement of social conditions
On one side, the first step is to understand by antisocial broadly speaking. There are some others reasons. Moreover, those have extract from lack of education. Because people not known our responsibility. On moving, who people are uneducated there way of talking as well as point of views are totally differ from others. Regarding this, that those people not gain more education through some of finical , and others problems there behavior is mostly stress , depressed like . subsequently, those people life totally distributed from lack of knowledge . Afterthat, some unacceptable conditions also develop from anti social effects.
On other hand, there is some other cause . Which is most fundamental effect company. Moreover, when people follow the company of bad people then they are gain automatically some bad habits from that people. Afterthat, some poor situation also created from it. Moving a head, when students mostly refers to bad company of friends. Then , they are faced so many dangerous conditions according to their situations. As well as, when people follow the company of drug addiction . Although, they have not interested to drink as apart from, when their friends pressuries to drinks. Then , through friends motivation in that manner then they not say to those people, and automatically people are changed by they have company according.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, then, well, apart from, broadly speaking, in summary, sort of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34482758621 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87993265907 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554858934169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3162676114 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.1481481481 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8148148148 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19566666246 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562392854054 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544000740756 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127281054585 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408636132652 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.8 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.