Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.do you agree or disagree.
Money is the requirements for everything related to personal to professional.in the current time of technological advancement,one of the most pressing concerns is regarding the given topic that earn money of every one hard working results: paying tax is good or not? through this essay I shall explore the same various aspects in the following paragraphs I am totally disagree this statement.
To commence with, that when we pay tax then automatically development takes place in nation.however, it is that related to any development : education, medical science, infrastructure.moveover, about education that is more essential for every person because gain lot of knowledge through government facilities.afterthat, about education point into more development takes place when we pay tax to government as well as more improvements into education level by government officials
As apart from, through public government more develop into their official working.however, into education many types facilities : scoliosis. Moreover, that either increased into education level or students gain lot of knowledge through government. Furthermore, politics has so many benefits about public.as well as frequently increase into necessity of public that have proper by union beside improve into ministry work due to it inclined in related study skills into development.
In summary, nevertheless , weighing both the option,l believe that their is no single conculsion still, l take this ground that an effective clap requires both the use of hands that taxes are very beneficial for the development ; people, nation. However, they give us so many facilities to everyone. About education, science and other level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, then, well, apart from, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7233201581 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44806803726 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628458498024 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 177.401337016 49.4020404114 359% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.0 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.625 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.25 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0798919273073 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348588197299 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370766355341 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520633156674 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027577177205 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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