Money plays an indispensable role in everyone's life because of fulfilling the needs and desires of individuals by cash. It is commonly believed by some individuals that humans should save all the earnings and should not have an obligation in paying tax to the government. I disagree with this notion as taxes are very useful for the citizens and nation themselves and the following paragraphs discussing it in detail.
Mostly imposing tax by government on those individuals who have an excess amount of money. There are plethora of reasons as to why the tax should be pay to the authority. The first and foremost thing is that the government should spend money on medical and service sector which provides good facilities to the society. For instance, government has given free ambulance service. In emergency situation, society can take advantages from it. Moreover, government can spend taxing money on the restoration of historical buildings. It makes the buildings alluring and attracts the more tourist in a particular country which is valuable for the surging of an economic growth.
Furthermore, to make the development in a country, government should invest the money on the improvement of public transportation. By replacing an old transportation and also furnish the better services to citizens, makes the environment more eco-friendly and reduce the hurdle of traffic congestion. In addition, government can use this money on making the infrastructure better. It also develops the rural region by connecting roads with an urban areas.
On the other hand, younsters are always ignored the tax because of the dissatisfaction from the government. Firstly, government are not able to decline the poverty and unemployment level in the state. Then, youth shows the negative attitude towards government. Secondly, the complexity of tax system and changes in tax slabs creates misunderstanding among individuals. So, that's why they are an uninterested in tax.
In mu own perspective, tax is very fruitful for our society and the development of our nation. If the government wants to gain success in each and every field, then government should take enough efforts to aware the youngsters and also encourage them to pay the tax.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.3376753507 324% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28851540616 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07641334365 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563025210084 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4313581902 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9047619048 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239009322 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677519348403 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845305532171 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128944362832 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612901416211 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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