Nowadays technology is used at a gigantic rate as compared to the past decade. It provides a range of services to the different section of society. Many individuals think that work at home and study at home is better than joining any institution. I will discuss the pros and cons of this statement in the following paragraph.
There are various benefits of working and studying at home. To begin with, the environment makes more fresh and clean. For exemplify, if the individuals working and studying at home ,they do not use any public and private transport. It saves not only the money and time of individuals but also makes the environment pollution free. Moreover, the individuals can improve their image with the help of computer technology. If the employees used this technology to send presentation to their mangers. It became more attractive and impressive than manually work and also creates a better relationship among superiors and subordinates.
Furthermore, individuals can get the golden chance to spend their time with their families. It makes the strong bonding with their family members. Also, they can share each and every problem with their ancestors and get better solution from them. Beside this, internet provides a lot of facilities regarding online courses. The learners can easily join it and also reduces extra financial burden on their parents. In addition, the online tutorial personally contact with students and charged a fee for service. Majority of students are solving their hurdles without any hesitation.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks of this statement. Firstly, the individuals use only limited knowledge and never get a chance to take guidance from their trainers. It reduces the confidence and competition level in learners and different peers of employees. Secondly, the individuals do not create better relationship with the help of internet only because they are not personally touch with them. They never understand what they expect from them. Thirdly, the individuals never gain anything from the experience and the past events of successful person.
To sum up, technology has eased our life in many ways and this is both a negative and positive development but on the whole side the positive side outweigh the negative side.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...individuals working and studying at home ,they do not use any public and private t...
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Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e with the help of computer technology. If the employees used this technology to s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in addition, on the whole, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76848070706 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528455284553 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3294899354 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.08 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.76 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25113030578 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059107831576 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642980017236 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125672559661 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589543996313 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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