In the era of globalization, the world is becoming a global village as trade, tourism, politics, literature and arts are not restricted within a country's border. This international business and cultural contacts brings more positive aspects while the negative side can not be ignored as well. This essay delves with these two views and express my personal opinion on that. However, I believe that the advantages of this situation are more.
There are multifarious pros of globalization. Firstly, there are many jobs are available to individuals because of international trade. It provides not only job opporunities but also very useful to diminish the unemployment and poverty in a particular nation. Secondly, to make good relation and brings more peace between different countries are only possible by incresing international trade which is very helpful to improve the economic condition of a country. In today's era, people have enough opporunities to travel and therefore have awareness about the other culture. Thirdly, people have many options to buy a quality products because of improving business and cultural contact in nations.
There are certain reasons why people opine that national identities are being lost. People try to copy the western culture. As a result, the similarity between countries are now increased. Individuals prefer to eat the same food, watch the same tv programmes and wear same clothes etcetera. Moreover, youngsters like to adopt the foreign culture instead of stuck within traditional roots.
In my opinion, this is a very narrow definition of losing national identities and nations are as differ as they were in the past. Protecting our own culture or tradition depends on us and it would not be harmed by raising cultural contact and business internationally. For instance, the diversity of india is unique. Each and every region of india gains the popularity for their own existance, physical features and cultural patterns which is impossible to lose it by enhancing foreign trade.
To conclude, there are more advantages of international trade and cultural contacts among countries. Total loss of national identities can never take place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39650145773 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92341768909 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9421907456 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1428571429 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2380952381 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223945104422 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568211884061 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385973867975 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112603762283 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193275090296 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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