The given diagram illustrates the information about the production of milk and processing into dairy products which are delivered to supermarkets and shops
In the initial stage, after the grazing of cows, milk is collected through machines twice a day and then it is stored into the refrigerator. In the subsequent stage, the stored milk is supplied to milk tanker which deliver milk to dairies daily. In the penultimate stage, different dairy products are produced such as cheese, cream and butter in the dairy and milk is also pasteruized and packed. In the final stage, the produced products and packed milk is supplied to super markets and shops
Having an overview, there are seven stages from collecting the milk through machines to producing the dairy products and then selling it in the markets.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er which deliver milk to dairies daily. In the penultimate stage, different dairy ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd milk is also pasteruized and packed. In the final stage, the produced products ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k is supplied to super markets and shops Having an overview, there are seven stag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 678.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0977443609 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64832480755 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 106.607317073 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518796992481 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9695453366 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.5 112.824112599 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.25 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282066148262 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181361727849 0.103423049105 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572767503983 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217369458493 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939622999895 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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