The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture gives information on brick manufacturing for the building industry. Overall, there are about seven illustrations that show this process step by step.
It is evident that everything starts with a special machine that gets clay for rolling it via a metal grid at factory. Then the material should be mixed with send and water. The third stage is a different from other ones because there is a choice between keeping the mass in a mould or dividing it in a wire cutter. After it, the future bricks need to be dried and it takes one or even two days. The next step is keeping the things in a kiln in moderate and high temperature from 870 to 1300 degrees and cooled in a chamber for 48 - 72 hours. At the end, when the bricks are ready, they must be packed and then somebody delivers them to the needed point.
To sum up, this process of manufacturing is truly long and hard. Nevertheless, it is absolutely worth it.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, then, third, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47928994083 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52243223098 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668639053254 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2638293248 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134985464647 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539494857295 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733115713284 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112235567075 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775312612073 0.0819641961636 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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