The picture illustrates the process of lead pencils production. It can be divided into three main stages with 11 small steps within which trees are planted, chopped and manufactured to become completed pencils in the package.
The first stage of this process happens when people plant young trees for four months then they are replanted. When all trees are about three years old, they are thinned in a larger area which aims to get grown with more spaces around then ready to be harvested after 14 years.
What happens in the next step is that the wood from the trees are chopped into thin slats by a cutting machine. Those slats are treated and after 60 days, black lead is filled into the grooves on the surface and fixed with glue. Afterwards, what people do is adding another new slat to produce sandwiches which experience heat and hard presses in the next step. After that, individual almost-done pencils are cut from these sandwiches and ready for the last steps.
At the final stage, in-progress pencils undergo a state of completion. They are painted, sharpented and stamped to put into packages and ready to be sold to the customers.
- the diagram below shows the production of a lead pencil summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- the diagram below shows the production of a lead pencil summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...come completed pencils in the package. The first stage of this process happens ...
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Suggestion:
... ready to be harvested after 14 years. What happens in the next step is that th...
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...rd presses in the next step. After that, individual almost-done pencils are cut f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34611589002 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8018867365 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0580549022037 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290791087271 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362548528714 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0408118560079 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385070092126 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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