The diagrams illustrate the procedures of cement manufacture and concrete production.
Overall, the manufacture of cement necessitates various equipments and multiple procedures. However, the production of concrete is simple when compared to cement production.
Cement production involves 5 procedures and 4 machines. First, the raw materials of limestone and clay are crushed into powder in crusher. Then the concotion of limestone powder and clay powder mix in a mixer befor rotating and heating in a cylinder. Afterward, the semi-product is grinded to the final product of cement that ready to pack in bags.
The produciton of concrete merely involve a mixer, however, the proportion of raw materials is contant. The raw materials include cement(15%), sand(25%), water(10%) and gravel(50%). After dumping all the perscise percentage os materials into a blender, the mixer will start to spine. The fully mixed mixture is concrete that used for building purpose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62328767123 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00500770514 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 16.3388701472 43.030603864 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.6363636364 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2727272727 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224710874616 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926101529731 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925780801072 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165403649357 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897189096962 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.43 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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