People constantly notice rubbish in locations such as roads, parks and home, which implicates that we are surrounded by it. Why is this happening? what measures will solve this problem? This essay will delve answers to these questions.
Generally, rubbish comes from packages of products. Consumers nowadays purchase pre-made or pre-processed products, which are wrapped or contained in package. For instance, we buy milk in plastic bottles or paper cartons. We buy electric appliance with foam stablize it and hard paper box encase it. These packages purchased along with commodeties compose the majority of garbage we are facing everyday. Some rubbish are decomposable, which will degenerate in several months; however, an enormous amount of garbage will last decades after being littered or transported to landfill. Therefore, measures must be taken to eliminate the amount of disposed rubbish.
The governments ought to classify and recycle rubbish in order to reduce the amount of garbage people produced. By classifying rubbish, recyclabe materials can be seived out for reuse and non-recyclable waste should be relocate in landfill for natural decomposing. With the method of classifying and recycling, approximately one third amount of rubbish can be recycled. Thus, the objective of reducing rubbish amount achieved. Australia and Japan are paradigms in sorting and recycling rubbish and people in these countries enjoy a environmental friendly society.
To summurize, most rubbish come from package of commodety. In order to solve the problem of increasing amount of rubbish produced by consumers everyday, governments should classify and recycle rubbish.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: Did you mean 'relocated'?
Suggestion: relocated
...euse and non-recyclable waste should be relocate in landfill for natural decomposing. Wi...
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Line 5, column 531, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, third, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6812749004 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91636187478 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605577689243 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2665337654 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2222222222 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9444444444 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284549306656 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988624388348 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683968506359 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177310908017 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352605560792 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.07 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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